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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
granted, but its broken i wish johnny cash was alive again
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: My Canyon
i reallly liked this poem. i cant punctuate for beans, so i cant really say anything about that. last stanza was by far my favorite. what goes inside your head ...
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
10/10. pretty darn pimpin
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Change One Letter
beast
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Make a Story :)
Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: you had to be you
you had to be you the pretty popular you the one who everybody wants the one everyone likes you had to be you but that's OK; you're the one i ...
Jan 22, 2009 -
Re: Broken Glass
i think this poem is pretty awesome. i kinda got it i think. but poems that are unexplained are the best poems. they leave the mind to think what it ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: to take a sparrow
the question is, how do you fly a leaf?
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: to take a sparrow
to take a sparrow, to fly a leaf, to live a life in disbelief to make a crane, to see the light, the final blow in the final fight to ...
Dec 10, 2008 -
Re: The White Man's Burden (2008 Version)
don't mean to bash on your views,but i have to on this one. we aren't killing innocent civilians over there. we are killing terrorists. the terrorists are the ones killing ...
Aug 14, 2008 -
Re: saved
Death will always strike the important matter is, is your soul saved yet? -------------------------------- not that good of a poem. but true. very true. -ghost-
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Mary
V1 I was waitin for a long time before I found you there your gorgeous smile, your pretty face, and oh your flowing hair. chorus Mary oh Mary, can't you ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: WWII debate
I think this peice was fairly good. not the best, but good. It provided interesting facts but they didnot really back up your writing. Also, I got kinda off board ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Currently untitled haiku
I like it. unlike most people, I enjoy what is mysterious, what is confusing, and what is strange. Haikus are great for that. Also, I gotsta disagree with hamerkid, I ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Suicide
nice poem, it flowed very nicely. it was good, creepy, but good. -so many names, I hardley know who I am-
Aug 5, 2008
